The beginning of my book - opinions?

She was everything good and everything evil. Everything innocent and everything impure. Looking at her was – when we first met – like staring at dirty gl. I couldn’t see half of what was under her skin. What lay tangled with her bones and intertwined with her tainted soul. I only sensed clarity. I only saw the innocence and the good. I was a foolish ancient man with my own dirty gl for skin, thousands of years of deceit and illusion lying beneath.